Posted by: vickyleigh on: November 2, 2009
So, a couple things that really stuck out to me about the ending, besides the obvious baby revelation…
“‘How humiliating….to end like this.’” ‘”…With nothing. No cards, no weapons, no property, no rights, no dignity.’” ‘”Like a dog.’” (205)
It was like Coetzee took everything that he had been building up to this point – the parallels between the lack of dignity in rape, and David’s sudden weird affinity for Bev’s fated-for-slaughter dogs – and underlined it all in red pen with this one conversation between father and daughter. And then he tacked on about a hundred exclamation points. If the parallels were vague before, then this made them inescapable.
Also, David’s description of Lucy on page 218 – “There is a moment of utter stillness which he would wish prolonged for ever….A scene ready-made for a Sargent or a Bonnard” really gets me. This, to me, is a prime example of how David has changed. When he first arrived at Lucy’s place, he was all, I HATE THE COUNTRY, whine whine whine. “Curious that he and her mother, cityfolk, intellectuals, should have produced this throwback, this sturdy young settler” (61) – implying that anyone living in the country is not an intellectual, etc. Even though a page later David does add that he is not ashamed of his daughter and her lifestyle, his disdain for everything unlike him and consequently beneath him – the simplicity of country life, etc. – is apparent in the way he talks and his attitudes. But the fact that he is able to see such raw and pure beauty in his daughter – even while carrying a rapist’s baby inside her – and that he recognizes that Lucy is in her element in the country – shows that David has softened a little. Life has knocked him off his pedestal, and he is able to see positivity where he did not before.
Yes I agree with you that David has changed and softened up by the end of the novel. I seems to me that the dogs kinda had a impact on David and so did Bev.. but Lucy did too. Somehow the dogs got to David more so than any other person in the novel it seemed to me.
I didn’t like the ending. I think it could have been better. Lurie did change to a point but still is carring some of his bad traits. Like him coming on to Melanie’s sister. I think the dogs did help Lurie grow as a compasionate person. Although i would have liked to see the dog live at the end and for him to take his daughter home with him.
I agree I really didn’t like the ending either. I would have liked to see Lurie change 100 percent instead of his minute change of direction.
i agree with you about david being knocked off his pedestal. he was so arrogant at the beginning of the novel about everything. he judged lucy’s life, every woman’s appearance, he just had to have an opinion about everything like he was the greatest person in the world. i love what you said about finding raw and pure beauty in his daughter. i think at this point in the novel, even though he’s cared about her and what happened to her and wanted her to go to the police and all that, when he accepts what has happened and sees his daughter as who she is without judging her, it’s the first time you can see that he truly loves her.
November 3, 2009 at 6:36 pm
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your commentary about the quote on 205. I also thought that quote did a lot to highlight connections in the book.